Forging ahead with fictional endeavours: ~ Write a life on a page and hurry not to its grave; abhor not the coming age, for eternal is the next page. ~ Read what you will, I hope you will enjoy reading as much as I do writing.

Too much Sangria.


This weeks Friday Fictioneers photo prompt!  Though truthfully, this one I already had written as part of a larger story; I just saw the prompt and remembered it.  As always, if you like what you read, have a browse around my works – I participate in many other writing challenges. ^_^  This one comes with an advisory of mature content.

It was the parched throat and the sickening taste of bile that awoke Kylie. Head throbbing, Kylie dragged herself upright, leaden from overindulgence. Blinking blearily into the room, she became aware of three things. This was not her room, she was not alone, and she was completely naked. Kylie peeked at the figure next to her with excited trepidation. Tall, slim, nice rear. Blonde hair with crushed gel spikes. And then a face that was most definitely not masculine. Clutched by foreboding, she lifted the covers to discover… Breasts… And that’s when she fell off the bed.


Comments on: "Too much Sangria." (10)

  1. An enriching experience. Hope she appreciates life all the more for it. Great twist.

    • Thanks. The novel I’ve drawn it from is one intended as a romance novel. It’s an experience that will never leave her, that’s for sure.

  2. Oops! Apparently this is somewhere our heroine hasn’t been before. 🙂 Enticing snippet.

  3. big oops indeedy 🙂 funny, I like it!!

  4. haha i just hope she enjoyed it but if she didn’t, well at least she was too drunk to remember 🙂 great story

  5. Good writing. Adult but humouous, and a good hook for a longer story.

  6. Now you’ve got us going, what happens next? This really drew the reader in. Well done.

  7. Brilliant, my plot is working. Seriously though, thanks. ^_^ I am planning to start posting this one as a weekly flash fic but I’m intending to complete more of it before hand. I’m already struggling to keep up with ‘Sweet Brain Damage’ and ‘And call yourself a…’

  8. Dear Penshift,

    There’s an experience that will stick with her for a long time for sure. Left me wanting to know more.



  9. Fell off the bed? Oops!

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