Forging ahead with fictional endeavours: ~ Write a life on a page and hurry not to its grave; abhor not the coming age, for eternal is the next page. ~ Read what you will, I hope you will enjoy reading as much as I do writing.

Leap of Faith Part 3


Another Visdare prompt. Part one is here and part two is here.


It was difficult. After years of being besieged Elendra had finally locked the voices out after months of training in the tower. Now she had to focus on a single one.

Pick someone you know.

Eric. Elendra felt the nod.

He will be different.


Look to understand.

Eric. ~ Dim lights. Laughter. Chatter. Music. Figure hunched over bar staring into empty glass. ~ The scene faded. Mari, is That Eric?


He’s middle-aged? I been here months.

Time flows differently here.

Eric ~ Clinical room? Dr. Feldmann. Test results? Liver Disease? Too much drinking… ~ Is this my fault?

? Your action caused trauma. A moment in a life of moments.

Some moments carry more weight than others. I should see him.

…There’s only one moment where you should. The moment of death. It is not wise too interact otherwise.

Elandra was already make her own plans.


Comments on: "Leap of Faith Part 3" (1)

  1. […] written in response to the photo prompt from Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers. Parts One, Two and Three. <—- Follow to find if you have not read yet.  This is my third segment on the same story […]

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